1500pt all rounder strike force

I've been working on making a list for a long time and finally came across a strike force that i like here it is

HQ
-GM Mordrak
200
-Inquisitor Corteaz
100

Elites
-Paladin Squad
5x paladins, brotherhood banner, 2x psycannons
340

Troops
-Inquisitor Henchmen Warband
Death cult assassins, Crusaders, 1x Mystic up to
160
-Strike squad
5x Grey Knights, psybolt ammo
120

Dedicated Transport
-Chimera
2x heavy flamers
55

Fast Attack
-Stormraven
multi-melta, plasma cannon
205

Heavy Support
-Nemesis Dreadknight
Heavy Incinerator, Nemesis Deamon Hammer
170
-Dreadnought
Psifle
135


Corteaz and henchmen have the Spear of light and go into stormraven to move after deployment maybe with dreadnought depending on terrain. Mordrak with paladins deepstrike turn 1, dreadknight, strike squad can deep strike or be deployed normally, while the Chimera floats about as distraction or transporting someone.

Like to here your thoughts.

for the price of the pallies you may have 2 squads of termies (and surely 2 GKSS/GKIS) it could enhance your body count ...
my 2 cents.
Aubec

Reasonably sure that Mordrak can't join Pallies in that fashion.
He has to be taken with a ghost GKT squad, which can then be joined by IC's.
He actually counts as a single model unit when alone

At 1500 points you really need way more points spent in troops. 4 choices as a minimum.

Coteaz is a good choice, however you need several henchmen squads to make it worthwhile. DCA with the storm raven is a great idea.

@Zealadin is correct, Mordrak cannot join pallies, moreover giving the DCA's scout while in a Storm Raven is pointless as the vehicles cannot benefit from it(not a dedicated transport) tbh I'm not even sure if giving them scout would work while they're attached to a HQ at all as IIRC IC's cannot benefit from it and Scouts doesn't transfer to attached characters.
Other than that lose the banner from the pallies, they don;t need it, and swap the psibolt ammo on the SS for a psycannon, too few guys to make it worth while. Assuming you're going to switch Mordrak out for something else like a vanilla GM it's not a bad list.

Our brothers are right, your plan wont work as you want. Better to find out here than during the game!