2000 pts assault army

hi i made this army to try and copy the blood angels army as they are having huge winnings
so i gave everyone a transport

wot do you guys think and will it work or any comments, changes etc

grandmaster(icon just, phy hood) 190
7 gk terms (1 incinerator) 337
land raider crusader( smoke) 258
10 gk (justicar-meltabombs, 2 incinerators) 300
landraider(smoke, EA) 253
dreadnought (tl lascanon, ccw, smoke) 133
6 gk (justicar, 2 psycanon) 225
inquisitor(power armour, power weapon, bolt pistol) 46
5 IST (2 meltaguns) 70
immolator (flamers, smoke, EA) 73
callidus assassin 120

just a couple of things...
- your LRC should only be 258
- immolator can only be taken by Sisters I believe. Don't think even WH IST can take them. You might just have to give them a rhino or chimera

the crusader pts was just a mistake and i will take the immolator as a heavy choice with them getting in after as it says i can take any inq unit so i think it should work that way but not sure

You are using WH as allies I presume? Unfortunately, HS is not available for us to take under the allies list.

i thought it says we cant take HS for IG or SM but that we can take any fellow INQ units

if so ill just swap for 5 celestians and try and find afew extra pts for them

hi i played this list today against a guard army and i won on kill points even though i only had my grand master and 7 retinue left on the board i love these guys they killed there way through 2 , 30 man squads with commissars in a turn each and lost none.

also to field the immolator i took my inquisitor as a witchhunter inq with 5 witchhunter IST

Your landraider also should have 258 since it has extra armor (5) smoke launchers (3).Nice one,on your win against IG,but what about objective games? :S And for 2k points i think you miss some troops.My cent though,if it works for you ok

yeah i used the list again today and won thats 3 wins out of 3 with this list
yeah i played an objective game with 2 oblectives against tau i used my mobility to pretty much destroy most his army and i held his base and he held mine but i managed to contest it so i won there but with more objectives i do have a list with masses of infantry mosty SOB and IST but only has 2 rhinos

Good win SoB's really compliment a GK army well since they can have a lot of short ranged AT weapons as well as heavy flamers. An immolator w/ twl HF is just bad news for an IG or 'nid army

yeah my immolator comes in handy if it hast been destroyed in turn 1. i managed to kill a vetearn squad before the flamers got destroyed then it was a transport for my inquisitor for the rest of game