1500 point new army

Hi, i'm pretty new to this and the game but this is one of my newest armys

HQ
Librarian 250
Grand Master 240

ELITES
Paladins x5 435
Assassin 145

TROOPS
Strike x5 135
Strike x5 135

DEDECATED TRANSPORTS
Razorback 80
Razorback 80

Any thoughts

too few units, your main scoring units consist of 10 man wich really isnt enough. sure 5 man paladins can be made scoring but you will roll a 2 on the average for grand strategy, leaving 1 point of it unused. better get the strike squads to 10 man each and get a unit of purifiers or termionators

also long range firepower would be needed, a vindicare is fine but as long as the vindicare is your only long range anti vehicle it will get targeted and shot down really fast.

You need to trim some points off your list. Consider your Paladins @350 pts. enough to make them quite dangerous and resilient. Leave the apothecary and B-Banner at home, you can spend those points elsewhere. Keep your dedicated transports simple, 80 pts for each is just nuts. Give them Psybolt ammo, and that's it. And your HQs are too expensive. Keep them simple and don't add anything else besides grenades and perhaps Master-crafting their weapons. Consider each @180 -190 pts. tops.

Brother Souba is right too, you need more units. Take one 10 man Strike squad and 1 5-man Strike squad. With that and all the point trimming, you'll still have about 200 pts. to invest in anything you like. I'd recommend either a Purg squad+transport or a Interceptor squad. If you feel more aggressive, try including one NDK, or even a SR. You can also go for one Termie squad for full troops spamming. Hope this helps!

At 1500 points you could potentially double your body count and have heavy support choices for anti-vehicle.

Also, consider (1) HQ rather than two. This will free up some points to invest in another sqaud.

Thank s for all the ideas
i was in a hurry and was unable to type everything up
I have battleled necrons with this army and won! I lost the assassin and a paladin, one of the razorbacks lost a lascannon but that was all

here is all the army info, it has been tweeked slightly

HQ
Librarian, mastery level 3, master-crafted Deamon hammer, Empyrean brain mines, Quicksilver, might of titan, sanctuary, smite the shouding, warp rift, teleport homer
265
Grey knight Grand master, nemesis warding stave (2+ invunerable save), maeltabombs, empyrean brain mines, psychotroke granades
240

ELITES
Paladin squad x4, Apothecary, x2 master-crafted Psycannons, master-crafted pair of Nemesis falchions, x3 master-crafted daemon hammers, brotherhood banner
395

TROOPS
grey knight strike squad x6, master-crafted nemesis falchions, halberd, psybolt ammunition
145
grey knight stike squad x5, psycannon, master-crafted halberd, psybolt ammunition
135

DEDICATED TRANSPORTS
razorback, lascannon & twin-linked plasma gun
80
razorback, lascannon & twin-linked plasma gun
80

HEAVY SUPPORT
nemesis dreadknight, heavy incinerator
160

In the battle i used the assassin for some fun and used quicksilver in my paladins assults to increase initiative to ten

i use the grand stratagy to give my paladins the scout rule so that they could outflank
my razorbacks and strike squads are just a destration to the enemy

Congratulations! First game w/ GK's and you tallied a win. That's pretty awesome

Thanks! but i did have a couple of practic games before i played just to get the hang of things