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Link to my updated Teaser for a Story I'm writing

Post by Praexes on Thu Nov 01, 2007 4:55 pm

http://forum.blpublishing.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1421&PN=1

Enjoy, and please comment!

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Re: Link to my updated Teaser for a Story I'm writing

Post by Inquisitor Lord on Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:22 am

awsome bit short but still awsome

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Re: Link to my updated Teaser for a Story I'm writing

Post by Praexes on Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:23 pm

That's why it's called a teaser. Cool

Comment on it please!

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I'm also working on a short Grey Knights story. Don't worry: when I finish it, you guys will see it first. Smile

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Post by Inquisitor Lord on Fri Nov 16, 2007 3:07 am

ooooyyy no time to post you fin that story off Very Happy

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Re: Link to my updated Teaser for a Story I'm writing

Post by maddmat on Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:05 am

I liked it. I can see him in my mind. Crap, I can feel his evil for that matter. He should definately be cleansed. Very Happy

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Post by NemesisForce on Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:17 am

Very impressive Praexes. You definitely have good literary skills. Even though it was short that bit showed your not a just a surface writer.

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Re: Link to my updated Teaser for a Story I'm writing

Post by Praexes on Wed Oct 15, 2008 11:26 am

Lol! This thread is alive??

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Re: Link to my updated Teaser for a Story I'm writing

Post by Constantine on Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:56 pm

I like what you have written so far.
I am curious as to why you chose to write about Chaos Marines. Will the story be about the Chaos Marine, or is this just an intro that will change to a loyalist perspective later?

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Re: Link to my updated Teaser for a Story I'm writing

Post by Klomster on Tue Dec 02, 2008 1:14 pm

Oooh, cool.

I've must have missed this.

Very chaosy.

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