Blood Angels and Grey Knights Allies 2000 pts army

Hello everyone. I just had a thought about an army build (not sure if this has been done before, or if it's even that competitive).
Here goes nothing.

Main Detachment: Blood Angels-
-Captain w/ Terminator Armor, Thunder Hammer and Storm Shield
-Terminator Assault Squad w/ Thunder Hammers and Storm Shields
-Stormraven Gunship w/ Twin-Linked Multi-Melta, Twin-Linked Lascannon
-Assault Squad w/ No Jump Packs, Extra Space Marine, Plasma Gun, Sergeant w/ Dual Lightning Claws in Razorback w/ Twin-Linked Lascannon, Dozer Blade, Extra Armour, and Hunter Killer Missile
-Assault Squad w/ No Jump Packs, Extra Space Marine, Plasma Gun, Sergeant w/ Dual Lightning Claws in Razorback w/ Twin-Linked Lascannon, Dozer Blade, and Extra Armour
-Scout Squad w/ 8 Models, Missile Launcher, Sniper Rifles, and Camo Cloaks

Allied Detachment: Grey Knights-
-Librarian w/ ML 3, Quicksilver, Might of Titan, Sanctuary, Warp Rift
-Grey Knights Terminator Squad w/ Psycannon, 3 Halberds, Daemon Hammer, and Brotherhood Banner
-Land Raider Redeemer w/ Hunter Killer Missile, Extra Armour, Storm Bolter, Psyflame Ammunition

Total: 1999 pts

Any criticism is welcome. I am attempting to make this competitive-ish.

Ki

I like the list, my only criticism is that you have over equiped meaning you have sub 40 models which is low for 2000 points.

The fat I would trim:

1. Lightning claw sergeants (you have a terminator assault squad and GK terminator squad, do you need them to be assaulty too? - they are back field objective holders)

2. Dozer blades, extra armour, hunter killer missiles. With the hammernators starting in the Raven (nice use of their invun BTW) all you will have on the table at the beggining of the game is a Land Raider, Scouts and two Razorbacks. 4 Targets - your transports wont last very long so the upgrades seem excessive. If i was facing you I would wreck those lascannons first priority and forget about the Raider because it wont be able to flame me for a turn or two.

3. Librarian ML3? One too many for me. Run him lighter and make a choice on the powers - what is he trying to do, what does he need to do it?

4. Brotherhood banner on a 5 man squad? Its a usefull thing to have but a bit costly on 5 men - like with psybolt ammo - for 10 man squads to get the most for your money.

5. Hunter killer is prob usefull on a LR Redeemer as it means it can fire T1. Leave the storm bolter the extra armour and the psyflame. An increase from S6 to S7 doesnt take you to the next instant death threshold, it will only make a difference if your flaming high toughness units like monstrous creatures or Wraithguard etc - all things that will wreck you if they get so close anyway. I would add the multi melta instead

With these savings you could add a whole other unit - more usefull than upgrades IMO

Wow, thanks DOMIN4TRIX (Man that took a bit to find how to type). I have trimmed the fat and actually added 12 models and a Psycannon to my army.

Here is the updated list:

Main Detachment: Blood Angels-
-Captain w/ Terminator Armor, Thunder Hammer and Storm Shield
-Terminator Assault Squad w/ Thunder Hammers and Storm Shields
-Stormraven Gunship w/ Twin-Linked Multi-Melta, Twin-Linked Lascannon
-Assault Squad w/ No Jump Packs, Extra Space Marine, Plasma Gun in Razorback w/ Twin-Linked Lascannon
-Assault Squad w/ No Jump Packs, Extra Space Marine, Plasma Gun in Razorback w/ Twin-Linked Lascannon
-Scout Squad w/ 10 Models, Missile Launcher, Sniper Rifles, and Camo Cloaks

Allied Detachment: Grey Knights-
-Librarian w/ Might of Titan, Sanctuary
-Grey Knights Terminator Squad w/ 4 Halberds, 1 Daemon Hammer
-Land Raider Redeemer
-Grey Knight Strike Squad w/ 10 Models, Master Crafted Psycannon on Justicar, Psycannon

Total: 2000 pts


I really wanted to say thanks for helping my N00bish self out. I have been trying to wrap my head around allies for a bit, and 40k in general, but I rarely play outside of a small group of friends, so I'm in no way competitive. I love the help. Thanks again.

Ki

I like your list, though perhaps I'd trade the Capt'n for Tycho. Great IC no in 6th. I too have both armies and was planning to build such an army. Let us know how it plays!