My first 2000 point list made from my 5500 point army

Hi brothers take a look at this list and feel free to make any comments and try to give tactical advice as this list is not the norm but I like to be different and try things not every one else is doing! That is the main reason for not having any psyrifle dreeds and in my big list I also include falchions,so once again bothers all comments are welcome but please take into hand what I have just explained.... So here goes


HQ
libby
nf halberd mc
3x servo skulls
mot
the shrouding
sanctuary
190

elites
paladin squad
4x extra paladins
1x apothecary
1xbrotherhood banner
1x nf halberd mc,psycannon
1x n demon hammer mc
1x falchions mc
415

troops

gkss
1x extra gk
1x psycannon
1x n demon hammer
4x nf halberds
transport razorback
1x tl lazcan
1x strombolter
1x hunterkiller
260

gkss
1x extra gk
1x psycannon
1x n demon hammer
4x nf halberds
transport razorback
1x tl lazcan
1x strombolter
1x hunterkiller
260

fast attack
stormraven gunship
1x tl multi-melta
1x tl lazcan
1x hurricane bolters
235

heavy support

nemesis dreadknight
1x heavy psycannon
1x n great sword
1x personal teleport
270

nemesis dreadknight
1x heavy incinerator
1x n great sword
1x personal teleport
260

now to my working I think that's 1900 all in all so give me some tips guys! One thing to get you all started on is that if I get rid of both personal teleporters for the dreadknight and add it to the spare 100 I've nearly got another identical gkss to the others in the list if I squeeze another 10 points off the dreadknight and down grade his heavy psycannon to a heavy incinerator! Would this be a better idea or has anyone else got any feel free to post

Whatever happens, do not get rid of the teleporter. And once you have the teleporter, the incinerator is by far the superior.weapon. you still have 12" move + 12" range + template, and that teleporter also greatly improves your tank hunting/threatening abilities. Watch those landraiders scurry away from you or die! Look at your oponent's face as he realises that if his landraider does not move flat out it is pretty much a guaranteed kill, unless you roll really badly, and even then the NDK will catch the raider in one giant leap. I have posted the stats somewhere in this forum, i'll make a tactica thread for NDK weapons. Halberds are usually a waste on a gkss, if you leave those out, and downgrade to 2 5-man squads, you save 80 more points, which is enough for an extra 5 men + lasback. Let me know if the apothecary is worth its points btw!

All in all: very nice for a first list; i'm a fan of less traditional.

Nice looking list that is less traditional as you say, something I am looking at myself. I agree with brother piquedram the incinerator for the dreadknight is the best way to go hands down imo. Also, I wonder is there any space in there for a dreadnought on the back of the stormraven? I've just bought a bog standard dreadnought on ebay with multimelta and Close combat weapon to stick in the back of a stormraven. It will be interesting to see how that works.

Il do abit of giggery pokery over the weekend and see what I come up with
thanks brothers