Experimental Joint Crimson-Fist-Wing with GK allies List

Alright I'm back and going to finish up my 1st Co. Crimson Fists with Grey Knights List (With DA codex). Not sure where I can put this however, so correct me if it is in the wrong place.

1500 points
HQ:
Belial [130]
Grey Knight Terminators + Incinerator [265]

Elites:
Inquisitor + Thunder Hammer + Artificer Armour + Storm Bolter + Teleport Homer [80] W/Warrior Henchman Elrich Davids[10]

Troops:
5 Assault Terminators + X2 Hammer/shield + X3 Lightning Claws [215]
5 Terminators + Assault Cannon + Cyclone Missile Launcher + Chainfist [270]
10 PAGK + Meltabombs [280]

Heavy support:
Land Raider [250]
Total: 1500

Everything Teleports into battle Except the PAGK(sitting inside Land Raider once game commences) which is for holding Objectives, I also intend to get the Inquisitor to Teleport into the fight with the Grey Knight Terminators.

Edit: Inquisitor is now a groundpounder running around with a teleport homer alongside the Land Raider.

Brief Fluff of characters:
Captain De La Rosa of the Crimson Fists 1st Company(Made up), he made his name when he was fighting the Orks on Rynn's world alongside Pedro Kantor as a Veteran Sternguard Sargeant(also served in the deathwatch), who was a crackshot with his Storm Bolter and is a well versed swordsman with his Master Crafted Power Sword, gifted to him by Inquisitor Lord Hellkan Juhnt of the Ordo Xenos. He is currently the acting leader of the shattered 1st Company.

Inquistior Erwin Heinzmann(obviously German inspired) of the Ordo Malleus, currently investigating the Mahlaeren Incident(expected Khornate Daemon summoning) alongside several units of Grey Knights aboard the Grey Knights Strike Cruiser the Divinus Justicia with Inquistor Lord Gerhard Kurz(who has a retinue), Erwin favours close combat to ranged combat as he feels blunt trauma is the best way to get heretics,xenos and traitors to understand him and the emperor, Erwin currently has only three members in his retinue, Commisar Pavel Narviz formerly of the 15th Death KorpVendoland Mechanized, Veteran Stormtrooper Elrich Davids formerly of the 88th Verdaskan Foreign Legion Stormtrooper Company and Psyker primaris Julius Havell formerly attached to the 18th Reigamo Infantry Company Command Squad.

Will consider adding more character fluff if you guys want more.

Nice fluff! Let me get this straight, you're using Crimson Fists (a successor chapter to the Imperial Fists) using the Dark Angel's codex? Is it because of the 1st company rules?

The list looks pretty mean. You already have all the models built?

Yep, because of the 1st Company rules(And that alone), about the models, not all are built yet (this is actually a side project-the 1st company anyway), I am currently building the Terminators(ordered some bitz from bitzbox to build De La Rosa) and stripping the PAGK(which I messed up horribly).

English/literature has been my strong point, hence I like to write fluff , also, is the fluff plausible?

Sounds pretty much in line with what I know of the Ordo Malleus and the Crimson Fists so, yeah, it's definitely plausible

I decided to add more fluff, hope I give y'all a good read!

Grey Knight Brother Captain John, ascended to the rank of Brother Captain after the Khornate Daemon purging of Haykorral, he showed courage and duty when he and his squad of Terminators were attacked by a Daemon Prince of Khorne who was once an Aspiring Champion of Khorne, John had given the final blow to the Daemon Prince, decapitating his head after the Daemon Prince had slaughtered the rest of his Squad. Now, John is a solemn and silent warrior who believes in Close Combat talent to Psychic Power, the current squad he leads, are hand-picked by himself, he chose the most promising of promoted Justicars (following the Purging of Haykorral). In his own right, John is a decent psyker and he specialises in mind reading and prediction(which allowed him anticipate and decapitate the Daemon Prince), his other skills include his ability to use the Nemesis Force Weapon on a similar level(but not equal) to the famed Brother-Captain Stern, Brother Captain John also is a crackshot with his Storm Bolter, once using Psycannon bolts to kill an Eldar Farseer at the maximum effective range of a storm bolter. Also enjoys the occasional Amasec.

Terminator Sargeant Raul Ortega, granted Terminator Honours following the assault on Ziks ridge on Rynn's world, he as all Crimson Fists, stubbornly held out against the Orks which outnumbered his 10-men Patrol 5 to 1, even after losing 7 squad members including his younger brother Luis Ortega(who carries a flamer), he fought on with even greater tenacity and anger, not stopping his murderous rampage on the Orks even after his Plasma Pistol Exploded in his hands, his squad eventually managed to defeat the warband, after he killed the Nob(by stabbing his fingers into the Nobs eye sockets and ripping the brain out) and the painboy. He was officially inducted into the First company as a Veteran Sargeant when he was tasked to aid Inquisitor Lord Gerhard Kurz and was granted Terminator Armour by Pedro Kantor.

Assault Terminator Sargeant Alonso Castillo, granted Terminator Honours following the planetary invasion of Gendiant Secundus, a planet which turned from the Emperor, the planet was a mere 4 weeks warp travel from Rynn's World and Pedro Kantor was tasked with sending the Crimson Fists 3rd Company to bring the planet back to Imperial Control. Gendiant Secundus was invaded following 3 days of Orbital Bombardment via a Drop Pod Assault, Alonso, leading a Vanguard Veteran Squad into the thick of the fighting, encountered an Alpha Legion Dreadnought and promptly destoryed it with his Thunder Hammer, but not before losing 2 squad members who valiantly tried to chuck meltabombs into the powerplant of the cursed Dreadnought. While moving from objective to objective, he encountered a large number of Khornate Daemons which assaulted the remains of his 5-Man squad, there he also lost another battle brother and was fighting for his life alongside Battle Brother Olivar Castulo. When all seemed lost after taking an injury, the Daemons started to flee, looking around, he saw a man in ornate Artificer Armour with a smoking Bolt Pistol in his hands and a crackling Daemonhammer, the man then gave some orders to the Terminator armoured men around him and no sooner that he gave the order, Olivar and him were picked up by the Men in Terminator armour, upon looking closer, he realised that they were Grey Knight Terminators, turning, he asked, who is he and what is the meaning of this, the Terminator armoured man replied, he is Inquisitor Lord Gerhard Kurz, he has seen your bravery and wishes to spare your men from the execution we normally reserve for men who have seen Daemons. Battered, Alonso and Olivar were returned to the Battle Barge for recovery. By the time they recovered, the invasion was over and Gendiant Secundus was back in Imperial Hands, he then noticed a purity seal was stuck to his Power Armour, one he had not seen before, Olivar had it as well, it was then he realised that Gerhard Kurz had given him the Purity Seal. Upon his return to Rynn's World, Alonso and Olivar were both given Terminator Honours and were immediately dispatched to aid Gerhard Kurz for his investigations. He was officially granted Terminator Armour at the request of Gerhard Kurz for his Investigations.

Have a good read!

P.S Alonso is actually sitting on my shelf right now and is probably the reason for the long fluff.

The inquisitor lord could use some more fire support in the a of a sage or two and some veteran guardsmen/ gun servitors and an acolyte always provides good fluff.

Good read! You're practically a novelist

Keep it going!

Nice stuff, good to see you have a backstory for your army!

I was intending to add the Lord, but fell short of points and settled for an independent Inquisitor, I'll probably be adding fluff for the characters, including the Inquisitor's retinues once I get home from my friend's farewell party(she is going to the states to study). Also, hint, Inquisitor Lord Gerhard Kurz will probably feature the soonest if y'all want, give me the characters you'd like, if not, IL Gerhard Kurz gets priority.

Inquisitor Lord Gerhard Kurz(using Coteaz rules), Known to many as the Defender of the Arrakaeten System and the Defender of Juxtania Prime, Gerhard Kurz has lived a resoundingly successful Daemon-hunting life, on the Arrakaeten System, on the planet of Trelayar Prime, he came to the rescue of an Adeptus Mechanicus Research team that was researching a site of a secret location known only to Gerhard Kurz and the Adeptus Mechanicus, Gerhard Kurz rescued them after a warp rift opened on a device with chaos symbols on it. Daemons poured out of the warp rift and within hours, Gerhard Kurz, his retinue and a Grey Knight Terminator Squad were on the scene slaying the daemons that dared to cross them, there were even daemons who tried to run back into the warp when Kurz stared(banishment psychic power) at one in the eyes! As a token of appreciation, he was granted a Glovodan Eagle similar to the one the famed Inquisitor Lord Coteaz carries. On the other location of Juxtania Prime, where he still carried his old Force Weapon, he was attacking a Nurgle incursion where Daemons were clawing thier way out of infected humans and onto the material plane, knowing that the infected were on an isolated part of the planet, Gerhard Kurz spared the planet from Exterminatus and went down to purge the Daemons. While fighting, his Force Weapon was shattered when a Greater Daemon of Nurgle attempted to crush Gerhard, the Daemons swinging Fists barely missed Gerhard but managed to smash the Force Weapon, with his weapon shattered, he pulled out his emergency shock Maul and beated the pulp out of the Greater Daemon of Nurgle. Following this, he received an anointed daemonhammer, gifted to him by the Ordo Malleus upon his return to the Divinus Justicia. On his many travels, he has chosen his retinue from many worlds, as of now, he often investigates with his acolyte Dacar Onos who often carries a Bolt Pistol and Sword as well as hidden Carapace Armour, Sargeant Tennhaumer Goular of the 32nd Henaforean Drop Troop Regiment, 22nd Storm Trooper Company, he carries a Hellgun as well as his Grenades. Private Julian Menrag of the 156th/441st Cadian Mechanised Division, only recently inducted into Gerhard's retinue. He also investigates with his trusty sage Darren Keinler who has experience with a Laspistol and Chainsword following his service as Regimental Advisor of the recent General Heimart Izenfraummer. Currently, Gerhard Kurz is investigating the recent warp rifts in the Gaemondus Sector following the Mahlaeren Incident. People who know him personally do not see him as a terrifying figure commonly associated with Inquisitors, often he has mixed in with local populaces without any hindrance to his disguise(Roaming mercenary). Gerhard Kurz also dislikes servitors and rarely uses them unless completely necessary.

Justicar Dominic, a silent figure amongst his brother Knights, rarely speaking unless he is shouting litanies and curses at his enemies, was promoted to Justiar four decades ago after taking part in the Purging of Renuarbon Secundus, he has slain many Daemons to date, his greatest achievement by far was the destruction of a Soul Grinder when he beheaded it with his Nemesis Force Weapon, much to the astonisment of Inquisitor Erwin who was attached to Dominic's squad. He is believed to be on the verge of promotion to Grey Knight Terminator, but has yet to improve his psychic skill to a greater degree, normally insisting on extreme close combat instead of using psychic powers. He often looks down upon Guardsmen inducted to fight alongside him.

very nice. the hellgun have been replaced with a meltagun as a gift for decades of service.

I actually wanted to give the Meltagun to Julian Menrag Which was why I didn't mention any weapons on him.

Also, I was thinking of dropping the incinerators on the regular squad to make way for 30 more points so that I can give Erwin a teleport homer(using DA/SM Tele Homer rules) as well as one body guard(Elrich Davids) who will probably be going around with a Hellgun and giving them a meltagun/meltabomb. depending on the points I can afford.

Edit: I've noticed that I can only field an Inquisitor as an Elites choice and not HQ, hence, I'll be editting the first post to reflect this.

Nice stuff, breaking up those large blocks of text would make it a lot easier to read and keep track of which line your reading though :p

Sorry if it was hard to read! I'll take that into consideration when making fluff for the other GKTs!

Awesome thanks Very good read, but it can be a bit of a turnoff, especially late at night which is generally when I have time to check, eyes go all blurry